portrait critique

Portrait Critique

Julia and Maddie helped me critique my photos. They commented their suggestions and they are listed below.

For this photo, I might try to fix the lighting. I want to create a more natural light instead of a pinkish tint.

For this photo, I want to reshoot the photo in the same position because the overall idea of the photo is fine. There is a dark shadow in the right bottom corner that I want to eliminate. I also want to fix the hair of my models so that their hair will not fall over their shoulder and instead be like Harper's in the photo.

Another critique that Julia and Maddie mentioned was to incorporate a fourth outside photo of one of my parents (so that a middle aged person will also be included).