Cooper told me that I should shoot this picture in less zoom and in a different location. He thinks the ESJ logo takes away from the picture and your eyes are drawn to the ESJ logo. He thinks i should zoom out  and get the plate in the picture or i should move location.

Knox also thinks I should retake this because she thinks it is too busy. She also thinks it is hard to tell he is playing baseball so she thinks I need to change the environment.