Portrait Picture Review

After going over my photos with 3 people, I decided I need to redo the pictures of Kieran and Brooke. They both need to be repositioned. For Brooke I need to put the focus on the whole chair and her. The lighting needs to stay the same. Also, I need to make sure that her hand in the photo even if she is jamming out and crop it right. For Kieran, I need to change the direction for shooting him. I want to get a side angle. Behind the soccer goal will look better and give a texture. Also, the lighting needs to be distributed throughout his face. I need to fix the shadow on his face. Overall, these will be easy fixes and I will be able to make my images better.